updated elven grief

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@@ -409,16 +409,45 @@ provided the current Grief is within or below the act's range below:
 
  * **Grief 0-3**:
 \quad
-Learning that you have been lied to. Being Robbed. Lying. Being accused of a
-crime you did not commit. Being maliciously wounded. Witnessing a drought or
-famine. Seeing a person killed.
+    - Being lied to
+    - Robbery
+    - Lying
+    - Calumny
+    - Wounding out of malice
+    - Witnessing a drought or famine
+    - Seeing a person killed
+ 
+\quad
 * **Grief 4-6**:
 \quad
-Killing a person. Having your home burned to the ground. Losing a friend due to
-separation or imprisonment. Stealing from another person. Fighting in a bloody
-war. Having your home betrayed by a friend. Being captured by an enemy.
-Being imprisoned for a crime you did not commit. Losing a bloody war. Being
-personally betrayed by a friend. Bleeding Out. The death of a friend.
+    - Killing a person
+       - Having your home burned to the ground
+       - Losing a friend due to separation or imprisonment
+       - Stealing from another person
+       - Fighting in a blood war
+       - Having your home betrayed by a friend
+       - Being captured by an enemy
+    - Being imprisoned for a crime you did not commit
+       - Losing a bloody war
+       - Being personally betrayed by a friend
+       - Bleeding Out
+       - The death of a friend
+\quad
+* **Grief 6-9**:
+\quad
+    - Seeing something you've made been put to an evil end
+    - Abandoning a region to fall to evil
+    - The death of a loved one
+    - Being tortured
+    - Witnessing a bastion of good brought low by darkness
+    - Having to kill a friend
+    - Betraying family and friends
+    - Killing innocents to do what is "right"
+    - Watching a friend end their life
+\quad
+* **Grief 10**:
+    - 
+\quad
 
 ##### Tapping into Grief
 ##### The Limits of Grief